Wednesday, July 17, 2013

Rough Cut: Not Too Fast For the Law

Once in a while on here, I like to put up unedited book passages I'm working on. Because I've got about three books going at once, and I swear I WILL pick one to focus on. Until then, here's a passage that introduces Velocator, a young, speedy superhero who has a run-in with a local authority. Let me know what you think by reaching me on Twitter,  or email me at bwzwriter@yahoo.com. Thanks!





It was the best part of Velocator's day.
He ran on Florida's Interstate 5 at his usual near-120 mph, letting the wind whip around him. He felt like a bird, a really fast bird. He also liked how the strong winds fluffed his brown hair dry after shower.
As Velocator zoomed past interstate exit after interstate exit, he looked at his agency- “approved” suit to see what colors it was turning. It was grey, green and blue to match the road, grass and sky. Velocator rolled his eyes; to him, the suit looked like a bowl of crayons that was sitting too close to a fire.
The suit, which was made for “beginners,” changed color with its surroundings to give newbies extra disguise. The agency's theory was that beginners weren't seasoned enough to protect their identities. Velocator argued with agency members that someone, like him, who can run near 500 mph and is, at best, a blur to normal human eyes doesn't need extra disguise. The members nodded, then told him to wear the suit. They also wanted him to wear the helmet, which was larger and rounder than a bicycle helmet and twice as uncomfortable.
But the highways were his. Velocator loved swerving among cars, looking at drivers do double takes as they swore they saw something out there. That day, the interstate was wide open ­
And then came the siren. He saw the red lights moments later as the highway-patrol vehicle got closer. Velocator rolled his eyes and gradually decreased speed. Two hundred yards later, he came to a stop. The patrol car pulled up behind him, and a tall officer got out. The officer threw his shoulders back and puffed out his chest as he approached Velocator, who smiled with the knowledge of what he could do with his powers to the cop trying so hard to look tough.
“Yes, officer, need help with anything? Some evil mastermind painting things on walls?” Velocator said, grinning.
The officer didn't grin back. “You know what speed I had you clocked at, son?”
“Um, gee, no, Dad. What was I going?”
“One hundred and fifteen. Miles. Per. Hour.”
Velocator whistled. “Wow, that's some fast running. As in, not in a car. You're supposed to be pulling drivers over, Officer …?”
“Officer Davis. Doesn't matter. Anything going that fast on my road gets pulled over. You could've been one of those supervillain types for all I knew...”
While Davis spoke, Velocator zipped around, just beyond the ability to be seen, and investigated the officer's car. Everything looked regulation in it. Velocator remembered one superhero who was killed after a villain posed as a cop seeking to help at a crime scene. All Davis saw was a momentary blurring of Velocator.
“... and we are sworn to protect no matter what. You understand?” Davis said as Velocator returned to his original spot.
“Yep, uh-huh, you betcha, sir,” Velocator said, not knowing or caring what Davis said.
“This road is 75 miles an hour, son. You were going 115. That makes you 40 miles over the speed limit, by my calculations.”
“Wow, you finally got to put that doctorate in math to good use. Good for you!”
Davis walked closer to Velocator, trying to look taller. “How would you like me to take you in, punk?”
Velocator stepped closer to Davis. “And how would you like to be the dummy who put a hero in jail for doing what he does best?”
Davis ground his teeth and moved his right hand toward his gun. Velocator grinned slightly, tensed up - and suddenly got nauseous, which was hard to do to someone who scale a mountain in a few minutes. However, the transportation device that brought him instantly to Washington, D.C., used a different kind of motion.
Even if the trip didn't make him sick, the destination usually would. In an eyeblink, he was in the agency.


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